Friday, March 2, 2012

What do you think of this poem?

Swagger is the fruit of intention

Persona is the heart of your girl

Charm is the key to affection

Moral is the root of your world

Love is a one word story

Fiction if you can't comprehend

Passed with a lifelong glory

Death wont be sad in the end

A woman is a trophy of attraction

A man is a medal of dare

If a mans at the top of a fraction

A woman wont go anywhere

For a man to become a good father

He must first grow up and be there

For a woman that must be a father

Give her a medal of honor to wear

Music the secondary mind

Is like a wind in the breeze

Free to go about blind

Because poetry teaches to see.What do you think of this poem?
I liked it I got a little confused but I love the beat LOved the way yu made everything.... fit so well together. Over all a great poem!

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